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Leaping Over

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Carrie leaps over wall into the compound.

1st pic
Power On by LordSnot
3rd Pic
Hey Boys by LordSnot 
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

As always you have a great perspective of a scene or page flow. your character well just read the comments & that takes care of that, now to what I hope your looking for my friend.
the 3D depth is as usual always very well portioned out, & the look & feel is my opinion spot on <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>
->as to the new hair look like it, but since it is hair, if feel should have a more flowing look(since I an a Rookie Poser myself when it comes to what can be done in poser as far as giving hair a flowing look, or how hard it st achieve that in the shots where she is leaping/landing, that the hair is to stiff,(only thing that I can think of would be changing that in a program [eg Photoshop]where you might bend or give the hair some twisting look like what wind would give it that real natural look)
->on the subject of shadows, 3 out of four frames look great nice softness levels , but in the 4th & final landing scene, her back shadow seems just to sharp for the distance between her & the wall(not sure if that is a shadow thing involving the light settings or what, you would know better than me.
-> NOW this might seem kind of too picky to some, but just a critique on overall lighting of this 4 part scene(assuming the light is to represent natural sunlight ?
- if that is so than Frame 2(top Right) sun light appears to me be behind & over her left shoulder.
frame 3(bottom Left) supposedly same sun light is now in front over her Left shoulder again.
Please don't receive as bad thing , just a detail that struck me little on the odd side, but to give the 4 shot panels the movie feel the sun wouldn't be in 2 different locations in the sky in a time period that she jumps over the building.
Also in panel #4 is the forklifts shadow almost makes it looks like its hovering above the ground level. ? ?

Though I will also admit that I took a very good look at this to notice these items, & I hope you take them the way I meant them as constructive Critque <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>

Over all think you captured the original scenes just like they were portrayed from the TV series Very Nicely Done indeed. well done LordSnot